Monday, May 2, 2011

*The Picture of Dorain Gray~ First Draft~*

Shima Limbu
                                                 The Picture of Dorian Gray Draft
The main theme that we have to connect with the novel, the picture of Dorian Gray, is imagination. The word imagination is referred to something that is out of human reach, possibly something that is all in the mind, external objects that do not cohesive with our senses and our reality, and lastly the ability for our mind to become creative through the process of imagining.
            The novel, the picture of Dorian gray could possibly have a connection with imagination and the basic object is the title itself, the picture of Dorian gray. In the novel, Dorian simply grows to become obsessed with image, and that being his own. Thus, due to the assistance of Lord Henry Wotton, Dorian goes through the journey of imagining his life as he reads the fictional novel recommended by his dear friend Lord Henry Wotton.
            Thus, Dorian’s imagination starts to grow as much as him, he believes himself to be the “hero” of every act, possibly Romeo to every Juliet, and that causes Sibyl Vane’s death to be just an act of sacrifice for the love of the handsomest man alive, Dorian. His imaginations leads him to believe that certain people are meant to make sacrifices for a man that deserves it all, and that all because of his image, the picture of Dorian Gray.
            Thus, the imagination of Dorian’s mind, leads him to make sinful deeds and become a vulgar individual. This also plays with the part of influence, Lord Henry Wotton enters Dorian’s innocent life and makes it open up to poisonous things, however, Dorian sticks to Lord Henry because of his very own understanding that he craves and is hungry for the things uttered out of Lord Henry’s mind. This plays into the character of Dorian Gray and his mindset; he always imagined to have the life that he never had, and wanted to make it reality. However, it is the basic fact that imagination cannot become reality, and if your imagination becomes poisonous, then there is no escape to run away from the dangers of the mind.
            Thus, Dorian becomes as poisonous as his mindset, maybe something that he always wanted to hide. Dorian’s mindset can also relate with the fact that he wanted to maintain his “good boy” image, something that he knew that he was not, deep inside his soul. His innocence from his looks could hide the devil in him. And meeting Lord Henry Wotton, he became the person that he always wanted to be, a devious human being. Imagination plays a huge role in part of Dorian’s imagination that actually turned into reality. The pros and cons of society is the fact that a character like Dorian would not be judged for any sins committed because one thing; His image.
            This leads to the painting of Dorian Gray, It could have also been the mere fact that Dorian’s sins could not actually be shown in the painting, but it is just Dorian that sights his sins from the painting itself. And his sins could be revealed to others because he wants his sins to be shown only through the painting, but not through him, and his body.  The painting could be a metaphor as something of a diary, something that is meant to be hidden but can still be seen by others if it is shown. Just like the ending chapters, when Dorian decides to show Basil his sins, it became shown all throughout the painting. It might have been just Dorian’s imagination that became reality through the painting. Maybe the painting never changed, it could be the mere fact that Dorian somehow wanted to throw all his sins into the painting of himself, thus, it actually became reality, and revealed. His imagination became reality, thus, causing his very own life.
              

1 comment:

  1. 1)Your first sentence isnt exactly attentiong grabbing but it is relevant. I can see where you are trying to connect imagination in the intro, it just doesnt fully grab my attention.

    2)I feel like your idea is there but I just cant quite determine which is your thesis statement.

    3)I really, really like your organization. The essay's organization, i feel, flows perfectly and makes everything tie in.

    4)from what i was reading, the grammar and punctuation seems to be good. the only thing i would have to say is to try not to start every paragraph with "thus".

    5)There arent any citations, so i really cant tell what pages you got your information from.

    6)The best thing in this essay would have to be the organization. the way things tie in is done effortlessly and is done in a way which makes me want to keep reading.

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